Okay. So here's a poem I've written. I think it's crap... but I'm posting it anyway.
I'm sick of pain:
Not the feeling,
Just causing it.
God I'm such a Bitch.
I Wish I could Fix
All the wrongs I've done.
Nothing major,
Just minor stuff.
But It's enough.
I wish you would make me cry.
Like I've done to you,
far too many times.
Then we'd be even,
And this guilt would die.
That could be the reason why.
I'm not human enough inside,
Any more,
I'm looking for the door.
Just to find a way
Out of my self-built cage.
What do you think?
I like it. it conveys your emotion really well. Personally I cant write poems even if my life depended on it but I like to read them and this one is pretty good. I'll be looking forward to more of your writings. (0.0)b
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